The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by seclecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the changing pattern in rates of newborn babies in China and America over a course of 80 years starting in 1920.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the birth rates of both countries experienced a downward trend from 1920 to 2000. In most years, the birth rates of the USA was higher than that of China.
In 1920, the birth rates of the USA registered at roughly 12% .this figures fluctuated throughout 30 years and reached a peak of 15% by the year 1950. A similar trend was witnessed in the birth rate of China, which stood at 10% in 1920 and peaked at 20% in 1950.
In 1955, the proportion of women who gave birth in America was recorded at 13%. this figures steeply decreased to approximately 7% by the end of the examined period. The birth rates of China witnessed a similar trend, which rapidly fell from 9% to 2% between 1955 and 2000.
- More people are taking public transport nowadays What are the advantages and disadvantages of this mode of transport 87
- The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.To what extent you agree or disagree? 61
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by seclecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 73
- The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.To what extent you agree or disagree? 61
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47852760736 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42423683559 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5133490328 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239813631954 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112915614929 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061683706281 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155335270146 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458793370754 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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