People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
That connectivity across the world is increasing enables people to travel to every corner for matters such as living or working. However, this trend also raises a question that whether newcomers should comply with the host country’s way of life. Personally, I agree with this particular view.
Certain merits make people opt for that being culturally accustomed to new communities. Firstly, because globalization has proliferated the numbers of multinational corporations at an unprecedented rate, workplaces with mixed nationality are common. However, although working aboard is considered to be a lucrative option, cultural shock is a major drawback that jeopardizes even an experienced employee’s career prospects during his expatriation. Specifically, the discrepancies between the Western and the Asian work style could lead to an overall declined productivity of the team. With this in mind, international workers should reconcile their expectations and their country’s manners with the nature of their oversea employers.
Secondly, the upsurge of the global population has produced many entrepreneurial opportunities. This results in the rapid expansion of many behemoths to achieve their financial ambitions by establishing new branches. But a company, without taking the local consumers’ cultural behaviours into account, could suffer losses. For example, the failure of MacDonald’s in Vietnam is due to that the hamburgers packed with cholesterol have no place in the land where staple ingredients such as vegetables, herbs, rice… are in favour.
Thirdly, a culture, besides certain appealing aspects of a culture such as food, music, history,… , also has certain taboos. If a visitor doesn’t want to prompt the local’s hostility, he should eschew these pitfalls as much as possible. For example, while littering doesn’t meet any punishment in Vietnam, the same act in Singapore carries a heavy fine.
In conclusion, it is true that cultural sensitivity helps people and businesses reach their goals and avoid unintentionally disrespecting local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91856677524 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39844348406 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680781758958 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0832444917 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815110663745 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282251375175 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370468491782 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049721031822 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332067610481 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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