1. People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, the rapid advance of transportation has render transitional travel common, which gives rise to expatriation. However, this trend also raises the question of whether expatriates should comply with their new countries' ways of life. Personally, I strongly agree with this particular view for certain reasons.
Firstly, contemporary students have better educational opportunities as they are offered many scholarships from different continents. However, if students are insufficiently adaptable, studying aboard could be a challenging experience. Indeed, drastic changes related to studying environments and teaching methods pose difficulties to students’ performances. In particular, the Western university’s culture which encourages individualism may create many hardships for Asian students whose school systems place a heavy emphasis on hierarchies.
Secondly, the increasingly interconnected world has generated an abundant amount of oversea employment. Although working aboard is deemed as a promising choice as it offers not only great incomes but also increased cultural sensitivity, However, if adaptation is not carried out correctly, international workers would face alienation. Specifically, foreigner workers with insufficient language skills are prone to misinterpretation leading to disagreements between colleagues in workplaces and so their social network shrinks.
With this in mind, instead of stubbornly trying to adhere to the original beliefs, expatriates should reconcile their behaviours with the native way of life. In order word, newcomers can strengthen the bond between themselves and the new culture through various daily occasions. Specifically, national festivities not only give stress relief but also are great educational moments for visitors to widen their local knowledge. Likewise, conversations with locals are a great tool that not only breaks language barriers but also helps expatriates gain trust from locals.
In conclusion, adaptation to a new culture facilitates a person’s academic and work achievements.
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- Prison is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people witha better education. Agree or disagree? 80
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- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'rendered'.
Suggestion: rendered
...the rapid advance of transportation has render transitional travel common, which gives...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...iation. However, this trend also raises the question of whether expatriates should comply with their ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3041958042 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42796460984 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3681202103 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0368854642674 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131048193541 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197716791074 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0242709967169 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221194924739 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.26 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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