People sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals?
In the present situation, many individuals are getting less nap times because of more pressure in the working conditions. However, this is different in previous work times because of technological advancements and companies expansion people have working schedules and proper sleep time. In this essay, i would like to discuss the drawbacks and changes that are made in the global environment.
First and foremost reason is the technology change in the work place,where more people are using the devices. For instance, mobile phones and computers which are advanced version and using of this has become increased way because of the pressurised work. Secondly, work depends upon the size of the company,number of individuals working. However, if there are less number of hired persons in the small organisation then it will be increased number of hours. For example, an employer who has to work for maximum 7 to 8 hours can change to 10 to 12 hours. Moreover,this can change the individuals less sleeping hours.
Finally, in the long run of work it is effected on the worker's health conditions. Furthermore,always safety rules and healthy conditions are mandatory in the work place.
On the other hand, some others opine that increasing size of the company and advancements in the working conditions can benefit people who are working in the long run. For example, increasing employers and more office spaces also impact in the work conditions. These variations in the work can help people to get benefits of work economy and to enjoy the working pace of life. Moreover, if employer needs to work at night times increasing salaries and other benefits can help the individual 's health.
To conclude, companies needs to change their pace of work because it impacts on the public health conditions .However, schedules of working can be benefited for an individual to get proper sleep times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14239482201 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88476793342 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6502103781 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104106109301 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466601712568 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380836291165 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666091787165 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395391976769 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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