People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
There is an argument that long-term punishment in prison is the most efficient solution to diminish the crime rate. In contrast, other critics propose that there are several ways for that aim other than long confinement. As far as I am concerned, regulations should be introduced concerning with the scale of construction-related to society.
In fact, lasting time in prison seems to be a potential deterrence toward criminals so that they become afraid of committing a crime. Indeed, being imprisoned for a long interval causes a wide range of problems to prisoners such as prejudice from the community, loss of esteem, and financial difficulty for the criminal's family. Those kinds of pressure, in turn, may prevent a person from involving illegal commitments.
On the other hand, longer prison sentences are not an ever-presently good method due to their detrimental effects related to the morale of criminals and society-related issues. Therefore, alternatives should be introduced to decrease crime. For instance, a suspended sentence is a less severe solution that can give criminals an opportunity to turn over a new leaf.
It is necessary to give specific pronounce in relation to each crime in order to ensure mitigation in the crime rate. Regulations are encouraged to be promulgated properly by the government. It exposes not only the fair of the law but also strict and clear discipline from the government so that citizens obey seriously.
In conclusion, regulation intervention restricts the crime rate efficiently so it should be introduced transparently. There are various solutions for that wish, including long being imprisoned as well as the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
...steem, and financial difficulty for the criminals family. Those kinds of pressure, in tur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33712121212 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2346067435 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9105215145 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22625298114 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074765868431 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585379383505 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125101816768 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504683088795 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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