People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and othervehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is widely believed that one of the solutions to environmental problems for local authorities is raising the fuel price. Although it seem to be effective, in the long term, in my opinion, there are many different ways to solve this issue.
Increasing the gas cost has many positive edges. Firstly, due to the high expense of vehicles, people would more regularly switch to public transport. As a result, fewer cars and motors would travel on the road. The government would then be forced to improve the public infrastructure to meet the residents' needs. Secondly, high spending on fuel also has a profound impact on the energy industry and helps to improve the economy. To charge a high fee for imported material, many companies would focus intensely on renewable energy such as wind or solar power. As a result, not only are the enormous gas emission reduced but also this is a great motivation for a sustainable economy.
However, to solve the environmental problem, the government should pay attention to other aspects besides the fuel price. For example, authorities should tighten the forest protective law. As a matter of fact, in recent years, the irregulated deforestation has broken out. Consequently, environmental deterioration occurs faster and brings many animal species to the edge of extinction. In addition, the local authorities should provide financial aid for garbage disposal management surrounding inhabitants. Properly processing trash at the source is the most environmentally friendly way.
In conclusion, raising the gas cost would be effective for environmental concerns, though, in the long run, other decisions could be more advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
... is raising the fuel price. Although it seem to be effective, in the long term, in m...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the long term, in my opinion, there are many different ways to solve this issue. Increasing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35606060606 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06404509757 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2600325568 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268784597035 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754596186844 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631555435354 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14686633992 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492900754679 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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