The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
Topic of overpopulation has been causing heated debates for a long time. The population has passed the mark of 7.7 billion people and steadily increasing. This essay will discuss the main effects associated with overcrowding and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
An enormous number of people causes a lack of territory not only for a living, but also for cultivation. 70 percent of the Earth is water and some percentage of the rest unfit for habitation. Even less of it suitable for farming and planting, but a human still needs to produce food. Developing countries feel it much stronger as they usually face this demographic problem and depend on agriculture. In other words, overpopulation cause a lack of farming area and space for living.
I'm convinced that the best solutions to confront with mentioned difficulties are to raise the level of the nation's wealth and literacy. The overcrowding problem commonly appears in poor countries among its uneducated part. That is why the world community should take some actions to overcome such problems by better standards of living for everyone. For example, scientists discover that the wealthier a person lives the later their have a child and usually the only one. According to the existing statistics, the certain educational standard helps provide good career which often leads to later marriage and planned pregnancy for most people. Thus, education and welfare of citizens are those solution tools that can save the Earth from population bomb.
Ground for planting and animal industry is limited, so meeting its finish is possible either as places fit for living. I consider that education and economic prosperity are the most appropriate method's to conquer those issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26690391459 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74518198179 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654804270463 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3862153685 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659676094852 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235356759971 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253108816829 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398952281856 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280502678429 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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