Playing a game is fun only when you win. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Nowadays there are many ways for people to get fun and spend their time with satisfaction. However, this is an opinion that the only way to get pleasure from games is a victory. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement, so let’s consider some of the reasons in the following essay.
Firstly, people are able to learn something new when they are playing games. For example, players can use tricky ways of playing as well as unusual skills that can completely change the situation on a game field. One should note here that kids often play football in this way. Some of teens may have bad skills at this sport, but they are always taught by their teammates who demonstrate techniques and important abilities which allow to play better. As a result, children always spend time together playing the game or just practicing doing something related to it and with some amount of jokes it becomes the funniest way of spending time.
Secondly, games allow to find new friends. For instance, some adults prefer to play in order to get some social interaction and communication. In this case, people gather together at some places and talk with each other while participating in a cardboard game. During that time friends tell interesting stories, share secrets and, in addition, make new friends. Consequently, it allows players to have a wide range of colleagues who always ready to meet and discuss new news or other interesting stuff despite that a game is not a main reason for the meeting.
To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that games are able to make us happy not only when we win, but almost every time. This is because we can learn how to play and we get a portion of social interaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... this statement, so let's consider some of the reasons in the following essay. Fi...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the teens') or simply say ''Some teens''.
Suggestion: Some of the teens; Some teens
...t kids often play football in this way. Some of teens may have bad skills at this sport, but ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'playing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: playing
...ues and important abilities which allow to play better. As a result, children always sp...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...ending time. Secondly, games allow to find new friends. For instance, some adults ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57980312581 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6951052433 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200407204817 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666522437401 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389850216028 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12357184602 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032427287057 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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