Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In recent years, with the rapid development of information and technology, there has been an increase in the number of people who read online news. Some individuals believe that printed news will still be the crucial source of information for a major part of population in the long term. I personally disagree with this view because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, I agree that traditional newspaper still plays an important role in our daily life. Firstly, in a newspaper, the articles and columns are well designed and printed in large size papers, which makes it easier for the readers to focus on the writing. For example, in “Tuoitre” newspaper, people can read a whole news in each column at the same time without having to manipulate the device as we have to do on smartphones or laptops. In addition, it has been believed that mainstream newspapers are a reliable source of information which provide people with a wide range of knowledge including economy, politics, culture and society, etc.
Nevertheless, I would argue that online news will become dominant in the future. The first reason is that compared with traditional news, digital news are quick, succinct and immediate which allow individuals to always keep instantly updated with global information. For example, we can know about the results of SEA Games immediately after each competition. Furthermore, online media channels are very convenient for users. The fact is that these days high tech devices have been becoming an integral part of human’s life and people are more likely to use their mobile phones or tablets to read news, work or entertain. As a result, traditional newspaper are less and less consumed.
In conclusion, there is a shift towards the channels in which people choose to consume news and I believe that news based – internet will overshadow conventional news in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'whole news'.
Suggestion: whole news
...uoitre' newspaper, people can read a whole news in each column at the same time without...
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Line 9, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xample, we can know about the results of SEA Games immediately after each competi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12779552716 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87016918723 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7692802564 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342168939533 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994638699951 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568722558258 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206325042767 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272948107998 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.