Some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
A portion of individuals consider that students who are going to enter universities should live on their own and this benefits them in many ways. I completely agree with the statement. Although students have to go through many difficulties, they will develop many useful skills that will help them in their future life.
To begin with, there are numerous benefits to living alone or with friends. Firstly, it will help them to become responsible. When students start living on their own, they have to do all their chores by themselves, and if they are living with their friends they need to share responsibilities for every task. This would certainly improve their social and cognitive skills as they have to adjust to their peers. Moreover, they will also learn the value of money, by managing their expenses.
Apart from being responsible, young individuals will become competent in every aspect of life. They set their own goals and achieve them with their own efforts. As a result, they develop the skill of managing their task independently. Moreover, young people also learn how to prioritize their tasks. They would soon realize that skipping a class would not only affect their grades but potentially their reputation in the institution. This time management skill would help them in their later life.
Finally, living away from home would help the student to acquire a multitasking ability. By managing all his work, may it be a household, college-related or work-related, he would become affluent in doing multi-tasks at one time. Companies these days hire those employees who can perform many tasks at a time and do them proficiently. Such students who live on their own are definitely ahead of those, who still depend on their parents for their day-to-day activities.
In conclusion, despite the fact that young people have to struggle with many issues, such as being inexperienced in cooking, homesickness, and the burden of studies, but they will become very efficient in every aspect of life. They will learn many valuable skills that would ready them for real-world adulthood.
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- Some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 56
- some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with it? 56
- Some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16034985423 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75225762126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516034985423 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7968066572 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23214264275 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864692111319 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763611231371 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141812331042 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495754315876 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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