Protecting the environment from pollution is vital important. Nobody should exempt from taking the responsibility of protect environment. Some people believe politicians ought to share more onus for protection of environment, which I disagree. In my opinion, individuals must regard environmental protection as a duty and practice in everyday life.
Even though, politicians are responsible for protection of environment, they have to consider other important issues, such as public warefare, society safety and law enforcement. Public warefare concerns the living standards of citizen, so does society safety and law enforcement. Furthermore, politicians are outnumbered comparing to the quantity of individuals. The efforts of politicians in protecting environment make no difference. However, the effort of every individuals cumulate, that wield a magnitude influence in environmental protection.
Because protection of environment affect the society individuals live in. Individuals are more responsible for environmental protection. The society people live in provide air and water. Air is breathed in and out every second of life. When air polluted, living standard decline. Water is necessity for everyone. Every individual suffers when water is polluted. Thus, individuals benefit from friendly environment and suffered from polluted environment. Individuals have more responsibility on protecting environment.
In conclusion, politicians are responsible for protecting environment. Nevertheless, individuals must take more onus. Not only because individuals compose larger quantity, but also protection of environment concern every individual in sapects of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...luence in environmental protection. Because protection of environment affect the so...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.338345864662 0.247107183377 137% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0751879699248 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338345864662 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0112781954887 0.0437548338989 26% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.135338345865 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0413533834586 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.43755804213 2.80594681477 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0112781954887 0.0326793684256 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0639097744361 0.0861772015684 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015037593985 0.021408717616 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112781954887 0.011925033212 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1682.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 230.0 316.048096192 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.31304347826 6.12580529183 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.513043478261 0.374742101984 137% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.434782608696 0.28420135186 153% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.360869565217 0.203846283523 177% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.295652173913 0.137316102897 215% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.43755804213 2.80594681477 123% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.8121195335 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.9523809524 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1056781037 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9523809524 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.814263465372 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 54.4306418219 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.74 1.69124875643 162% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388146171055 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127321070907 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0956184783479 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.431494790244 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107263656606 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142456320156 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103341628597 0.0742795772207 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333351263532 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0172811672267 0.0638462369009 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280651417891 0.228012699653 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294648472426 0.058150111329 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.