The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map give information about a residence has changed between 2010 and today.
It is clear that the student-bedroom witness changes with the most noticeably being the car parking and en-suite room in main entrance.
The hall was designed in 2010 and included three student-bedroom, one bathroom, kitchen and one main hall. The main hall directly accessible one student-bedroom and the kitchen was designed is front of second student-bedroom. Look at the map in 2010, student accommodation building third student-bedroom located to the left of the garden. With living room and bathroom located convenient way for student personal hygiene and relaxing, living room near bedroom and bathroom located behind a living room.
While the entryway remains in the west, it becomes noticeably narrower and go to hallway we will see en-suite room first. Meanwhile compared in 2010, today student accommodation building has five student-bedroom and a bathroom and kitchen. Besides, three bedroom built side by side and fourth bedroom located behind first bedroom and near bathroom. However a kitchen was greatly extended to a kitchen and social area. Today the garden was replaced by a large car parking. Summarize the information by a selecting and reporting the main features can be seen that, student accommodation building today modern than in 2010 and complete necessary facilities for student.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...allway we will see en-suite room first. Meanwhile compared in 2010, today student accommo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...behind first bedroom and near bathroom. However a kitchen was greatly extended to a kit...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41013824885 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0610180652 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1381617148 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152681814631 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072803985826 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955232070589 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140083224854 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103800830989 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.