Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue.
It is stated that the massive divorce rate around the globe is actually due to polygamy. This essay will discuss the presumable reasons behind this phenomenon and propose possible solutions.
Certainly, polygamy has deep roots inside our societies: for example, there are still some cultures that celebrate polygamy as a fundamental aspect of their morals and do not consider it a problem. In our society, on the contrary, having more than one partner for life is not seen as a normal thing to fancy, but more likely it is a result of our non-committal culture. We are not able anymore to commit to someone in the name of our feelings, but instead, we are always looking for something else, assuming that it will make us feel complete. People today rely too much on others to make them feel complete whereas it would be more important to work on their own self-esteem.
It is not easy to propose solutions to this phenomenon, as polygamy is deeply rooted in ancient societies and it is still reflected in our cultures. A study could be conducted to better discover why this problem keeps getting worse, what are the psychological implications of commitment and why do people prefer to lean towards others instead of fight to build strong monogamous relationships. On the other hand, as a presumable cause, social media should be reduced in terms of what we can do with them, who we can send pictures and other contents to and what kind of files we can upload. Last but not least, when it comes to divorce, people have access to it too straightforward, so maybe the introduction of a form of punishment for polygamous married people could help sooth the problem.
In conclusion, we should ask ourselves: are human beings really naturally made for polygamous relationships, or is our society that is unable to be satisfied?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, really, so, still, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83067092652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81703999947 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7020339183 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109753600648 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543601929263 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090749067852 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979759418298 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141339956387 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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