A poor infrastructure hinders under developed countries from progress and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
It is evident that developed countries are growing further owing to their rational infrastructure. Many people calm that impoverished countries should overcome issues of undeveloped infrastructure by taking assistance from external sources, to flourish as a prosperous nation. In my opinion, I partly agree with this view and advanced facility is not only factor determining the success of a nation
There are some main reasons why international supports are one of the most effective solutions for improving the nation ‘ s infrastructure. Firstly, in poor countries, they cannot afford to invest that kind of money, they have to struggle with inadequate infrastructure such as lack of power supplies and water distribution systems , education and hospital , so human of the countries face difficulties about health problems or unemployment. Therefore, receiving the investments from the developed countries is helpful for governments in improving and developing the poor infrastructure as well as the economy. In additional, the poor countries are indebted to the developed nations with a huge amount of money, so encouraging big countries in investment is a positive approach to reduce loans as well as bring many economic benefits for both sides. For example, Korean encourage the usa to invest in infrastructure or military to reduce loans
Good infrastructure alone will not ensure the development of nation. Along with infrastructure, it is important to invest in areas such as education and healthcare. In addition to building hospitals the government must ensure that quality of healthcare are provided at these places for free or at affordable rates and Social welfare schemes should also be given a push. To improving the development of the country, education is considered as important sector. The good quality of the education generates talents in the future who will contribute to build a modern and progressive country. For instance , in Vietnam, the quality of education is the main target of the government in investment policies
In conclusion, improving the infrastructure in poor countries by international aids is an active way; however together with facility , education and healthcare is considered as importance in developing the nation
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53314121037 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29910101383 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7747370437 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225299159144 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815839603798 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380648564995 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141464683549 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044333825578 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inion, I partly agree with this view and advanced facility is not only factor det...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctor determining the success of a nation There are some main reasons why internat...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rastructure. Firstly, in poor countries, they cannot afford to invest that kind o...
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Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with inadequate infrastructure such as lack of power supplies and water distrib...
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Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... supplies and water distribution systems , education and hospital , so human of th...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ibution systems , education and hospital , so human of the countries face difficu...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ospital , so human of the countries face difficulties about health problems or un...
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Line 2, column 947, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...frastructure or military to reduce loans Good infrastructure alone will not ensur...
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...rn and progressive country. For instance , in Vietnam, the quality of education is...
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...of the government in investment policies In conclusion, improving the infrastruct...
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Suggestion: ,
...tive way; however together with facility , education and healthcare is considered ...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...d as importance in developing the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53314121037 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29910101383 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7747370437 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225299159144 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815839603798 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380648564995 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141464683549 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044333825578 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.