Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
Alternation of popular hobbies is getting quicker and quicker result in some arguments that changing popular recreations tend to reflect trends and styles rather than true personal interests. I completely agree with this assertion.
On the one hand, many hobbies are simply faddish trends. I believed these trends deprived from peer group pressure among people, especially children and teenagers. When I was 13, for instance, I want to have long bangs by the reason this style is very much in vogue at that time, many surrounded friends possessed it, but this style only existed awhile. Another typical example is the phenomenon of admiring famous singers. Some new celebrities suddenly reputed, their career path was flying high and seem to reach a peak but for over a few months or so, they were fade into oblivion.
On the other hand, some trends help people find out what makes them interesting. Over recent years, there have been several different fitness trends for adults, from jogging to aerobics to yoga. Many fitness centers appeared, they also devised big and clever marketing strategies, finally, they succeeded in holding for lots of people. For the first time, everyone did exercises for pleasure or just followed the crowd, but after a short time, they recognized that they can get many benefits and relaxation from them and they make a habit of it. After all, they did for interests not only for temporary passion. I think that is a good example of popular interests that also reveal true enjoyment.
In some periods, people make choices based on their enjoyment but I believe that changing popular interests are more trendy than pure excitements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, while, after all, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46617849387 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2817405642 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173275900128 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054310926859 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430285216928 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114781078688 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342330295225 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.