In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Across the globe, many retailers are shutting down their businesses due to low patronage from traffic since they prefer buying from bigger stores. This is considered a negative trend because the economy would be badly affected and clients would not have access to personalized duty.
To start with, a decrease in consumers' patronage of small-scale businesses has a negative effect on the national GDP. In other words, it takes only a thriving business to pay taxes and other necessary bills expected of them either at the national, state or local level. This is because low patronage tends to discourage business proprietors and also leads to low capital accumulation. For instance, Ibadan North L.G.A has reported a 60 per cent decrease in revenue generated through small and medium enterprises in the last 5 years. Consequently, an economy would be stagnated in growth as there would be no revenue to provide basic infrastructural facilities.
Additionally, buyers missed out on the great customer maintenance they ought to enjoy from retailers when compared to some shopping malls in the environment. This is because big shopping centres place little or no value on their clients and are less concerned if they patronise them again unlike minor shop occupants who give their best assistance to bring people back in order to enjoy mouth-to-mouth referrals through satisfied ones. For example, most shop landowner in Ibadan seldomly invests their resources in marketing when compared with bigger shops. Apparently, the qualitative client approach SMEs give to their customer is strong enough to leverage more traffic generation to their outlet.
In summary, I opined that the act of patronising big stores against small shops by people is disadvantageous to the economy and individuals because it would lead to a low generation of revenue, and customers would not be able to access exceptional customer benefit shop holder offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, if, so, for example, for instance, in summary, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.332247557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88651181734 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5429638508 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264810726517 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833702622111 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616135427068 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149701584021 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723485529023 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.