At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary days, some countries witness the growth of the young people population is higher than the number of ageing people. With the data, there is debate surrounding this situation. The statement will discuss both pros and cons of this topic.
Undoubtedly, there are some specific benefits regarding the large rate of young people outnumbering older people, such as labor, knowledge, and economy. Firstly, having large proportions of young people will create a workforce for the countries, especially developing countries. For example, they do not need to search for or hire employees from different countries. Secondly, young adults are quick learners. Moreover, they can easily approach new knowledge and contribute to modern life. Lastly, the pool of young workers will help to reduce the financial burden of providing healthcare and pensions for an aging population. For instance, countries like China and India have many young people who have contributed to their countries in recent years.
On the other hand, there are always two sides of a coin. Following the above advantages, there are some disadvantages to this case. Initially, the increasing amount of adults will cause not only a rise in the unemployment rate but also unrest in society, including robbery, conflict, and wealth gap. In addition, It may affect the quality of education. It is clear to see that if young people rapidly grow, the schools have to divide and manage the students properly. If not, it will be hard to provide the students with the necessary knowledge as well as behavior in society.
Despite the potential disadvantages, I believe that the support from the relatively big number of young individuals outweighs the disadvantages of older people. In conclusion, having a large population of young adults has both advantages and disadvantages. Governments should focus on developing policies and programs to maximize the potential economic benefits of a young population while minimizing the potential negative consequences.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43037974684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93219726559 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3684880139 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1578947368 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321267182418 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845119359041 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728392898939 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183875451955 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539314760946 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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