With the pressure on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
students are now standing in front of big stresses to their curriculum which they need to complete, another thinks that it was unecessary to bring cook method and excercise until the academic progress is finished and might be take out so teenager can easily for understand remain suject.these issues must be solved and have an explanation for everyone to know why has been chosen
pupils whose experience the most intense period in whole life, what they shoul accumulate just limmited in several words: your parent's happy or unhappy that mentioned about the first tone of stone pupils got.what affect directly in how people in the acummulatte knowledge's stage. does strict education good way for teaching children. I perhap no wonder will said no ,accurate method doesn't include too many of strictly.while puberty made them more susceptible, the key culprit has been generating and appeared more arguments by genz and their parent.
turning to why chool might deleting unconnected project. Almost citizent in this time of age much more nervous invole getting a bad sore means you could be graduate or not base on your bands.As there were different kind of subject cause adults to worried whether removing unessential subjects keep them in a balance state. for instance,cooking or gymnastic, those student would learn at home because of mother and father experienced this by a long years, tend to be approach at family.
Anyways, depend on wht the academic progress was, you should recognize studying is always the fastest thing to becoming suceed,what pupils need to remember: visualising in the cognitive space forget all negative ones and start atempt passing wholly test
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, if, so, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22509225092 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6738639863 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.752767527675 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.93283358 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.285714286 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7142857143 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142212798728 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511021740622 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341578744899 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726732340069 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213910524617 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.