prevention is better than cure. out of a country's health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Irrefutably, in this modern globalization era, a plethora of people know about health education and they prefer the medical field instead of preventive measures in many countries developed medical colleges and give better health education regarding the major disorder and body system. In my opinion, I think that, the government should do work on preventive measures and major health conditions for human beings.
To begin with , there are a lot of reasons why the government should do improving health education for the students and why this so important part of our life.first and foremost if the people know about a health issue hence they can easily solve the problem and aware about the disease condition so authority should be spent money in health education. The second reason, nowadays immensely people do not knowledge about new medical technology like MRI, CT scan, and also health education thus the government has the responsibility to do invest more money in health education and so students are involved and teach the other illiterate people.
Moreover, I certainly believe that preventive measures are a very integral part of our life instead of health education. There are predominant reasons, firstly in this trend era everyone has preferred fast food and they are not doing yoga,meditation,exercise after that they are suffering from many diseases condition such as cholesterol, diabetes, blood pressure hence the government should organize camping related health problems and teach to the people how to prevent and safety measures related to health. secondly, the government should spend money on health insurance, medical clamp so poor people easily treat their disease conditions and other health issue.
In recapitulation, I strongly believe that prevention is better than cure and safety measures are also an important role in our life and also health education is important for the everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: , meditation
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: the; everyone
... also health education is important for the everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92014120945 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4197586478 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.125 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327513032983 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164366575568 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288502081976 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217692802093 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031301851846 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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