"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Health is the greatest asset a person possesses. The modern medicine is based on two lines prevention and treatment. Many people argue that the balances of the annual health care budget should shift to prevention compared with a cure, In this case, I'm inclined to agree preventive measures and health education should be a priority of government.
To begin with, to prevent the diseases from happening than required to pharmaceutical or surgical intervention is much easier and wiser. The lots of the serious diseases like diabetes, heart disease, a variety of cancers and HIV brought on by factors such as poor lifestyle, lack of knowledge, obesity, smoking and also pollution. Because the cost of the treating these diseases are very high and the prognosis uncertain, some basic solution like improving diet, anti-smoking campaigns, less use of sugar and salt help us to have healthy habits of eating and living. For example, these days with polio vaccination schemes around the world, the child protects and immunize from polio.
On the other hand, the government should have a short and long program to take away money from remedy for people who already ill or suffer those diseases preventable or predictable like inherited ills. Researchers need government money and support for medical survey and experiment for cures and develop new medicines.
To sum up, the lifestyle changes should be teach from the early ages. Preventive measures help us to save health, time money. Prevention may be better than cure, but it can never wholly replace it. Thus in diverting health spending from treatment to preventative measures, nations should have balanced and useful approaches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24814814815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69416124259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662962962963 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2948091622 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290814653161 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103499076473 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896633901462 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18344354464 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125044358272 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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