Most of the people think that penalizing murderers with death sentence is highly culpable of committing murder. I do not agree with this perception. In this essay I am going to discuss on why death penalty is far superior than prisoner sentences.
On one hand, advocates of life imprisonment insists that life in prison is more humane and less cruel than death penalty. Because life in prison offers them to enjoy part of their lives and still able to keep in touch with their family. To add to this, Some criminals can come out of prison on parole after being assessed by a board. This scenario may paved the way to monsters to commit new crimes. To illustrate, a recent news story reveled that a teenager who was victim in rape case and release on bail killed his own mother for his daily expenses. Therefore, if our honorable advocates prosecuted and sentenced to death penalty, his mother might have rescued from him.
However, I strongly believe that criminal ought to get the death penalty since it acts as a powerful deterrent. Then, law breakers would think twice knowing that committing crime would take their lives, compelling not to involve with it. And also, it will create fear of assault to think about criminal activities. Furthermore, incarcerating criminals in prison is neither punishing nor intimidating, even most of the criminals wanted to enjoy imprisonment facilities even after their release. Hence, in order to keep the society safe and to instill terrible fears in the brains of murderer, death penalty is the only option.
Finally, the death sentence is the imperative for tax payers money. For instance, the cost of prosecution and maintenance is became burden to the government leads to economic drain.
To sum up, though capital punishment has some ineffective injections, these can be improved by involving forensic and DNA departments. Considering major scares and the reduction of financial strains, life in prison is nowhere near as preferable as the death sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06927710843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70926828404 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623493975904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5627599158 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261086172263 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674626812857 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466992431098 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127206232924 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469338732886 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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