By punishing murders with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murders.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While giving a death sentence to murders, the society feels that they are too liable of committing a murder, hence life time imprisonment is a better option as per them. I do not feel that life time in prison is a better punishment for the murders and I shall justify my views with the below examples.
By not giving a strict punishment to the prisoner, the person who shall commit such severe crime, shall not have any fear of the judgement as they know that the maximum punishment they shall get is life-time of service in the prison. They have a chance of breaking the prison and again do such a harsh work. Such people are a always a threat to society. Few months back, it was reported that a prisoner in Tihar jail, who was sent for life time imprisonment broke the jail and was ran away, after few months he was again found and captured only to find out that he murdered the jeweler of that area because the person did not agree to give him the money he asked as a ransom.
Another reason why I feel that death charges must be given to the murders is due to the family of the victims. The loss that the family experiences can never be fulfilled again and if they come to know that the person who killed their loved one is still alive and there is a possibility that due to good behaviour that person might get a reduce in the sentence or perhaps set free, is similar to having a feeling of betrayal.
Hence, I do not agree that the murders must be sent to life imprisonment, instead they must be given death charges so that family of the victim can get equal justice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...oo liable of committing a murder, hence life time imprisonment is a better option as per ...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... option as per them. I do not feel that life time in prison is a better punishment for th...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n do such a harsh work. Such people are a always a threat to society. Few months ...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...risoner in Tihar jail, who was sent for life time imprisonment broke the jail and was ran...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...ime imprisonment broke the jail and was ran away, after few months he was again fou...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to good behaviour that person might get a reduce in the sentence or perhaps set free, is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32996632997 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27199140101 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8345135905 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.888888889 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264303164461 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118829958412 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100501800566 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175156225571 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111469666992 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.43 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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