[9:09 AM, 5/5/2021] Badal Patel : Some individuals opine that it is best to accept a bad situation unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While others that it is better to try and improve such situations. I personally believe that both the views are crucial but it depends on situations.
Tu begin with, some individuals think that it is best to accept bad situations because thaey do not have any idea to solve problem. On the other hand, people that it is best to adjust which problem. For an example, one student who got 69 percentage in examination means he got B grade and he only 1 percentage for to got A grade but he adjust with B grade because he could not do anything to got A grade in that examination. But in front of whole class teacher found that mistake what teacher did and teacher revamped that mistake and student got 70 percentage means A grade. Now he motivated to do more practice in next exam because he got a grade and he was happy.
However, other people argue that it is better to improve situation because they know that if they do not improve that situation it is too hard to live with the type of situation. For.an instence, one man who earn few money in annual and it is too hard to live life with few sources. So, he do duo job in day and Start earn more money to improve the situation. And due to another work he can pay water, electricity and mobile bill and he can buy more things which he needs, By this example, i conclude that it is best to improve situations.
In nutshell view point of these statements I believe that both the views are correct but sometimes the first view is better and sometimes the second view is best. In short depends on situations.
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...uals think that it is best to accept bad situations because thaey do not have any...
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...ke what teacher did and teacher revamped that mistake and student got 70 percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42356687898 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5017726142 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480891719745 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0656120635 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285968798386 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11031445712 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100389127962 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213568376602 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146830823721 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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