People learn three skills in education reading, writing and math. And which are very essential for every human but some individuals think that computer skills are also pivotal for development. I totally agree to given statement that computer skills are also vital for development because nowadays learning about technology is very important.
To initiate with, Nowadays, schools must teach given three skills to students and some schools teach computer skills also because we can see that computer skills has been using every where. People can use computer in bill payments, net banking online shopping and daily work. Using of computer is become a habit of every people so that is why some individuals and also government think every adolescent should learn computer skills. And this fourth skills has a lot of positive impact.
On the other hand, some people think that it is has more negative impacts rather than positive and yes, it is indeed true that some adolescent utilise computer in a wrong way and it depends on them mind because not every people , very few people utilise computer in wrong way such as hacking, visit any danger sites and make fake accounts for any personal revenge and these types of stupid activities brought them in a pitfall. As my perception computer skills has some negative impacts but no more than positive impacts.
Conclusively, I believe that the four computer skills are very beneficial for adolescent and some individuals. Who think every child will get benefits from this skill so they are indeed true because at present, computer skills are very crucial and everyone should learn computer skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...see that computer skills has been using every where. People can use computer in bill paymen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e that some adolescent utilise computer in a wrong way and it depends on them mind because not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12639405204 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42512285266 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.1190877042 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35978742958 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161787340507 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732951618689 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235724415606 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545711584141 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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