Q: Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The relationship between kids and pets always aroused a lot of people debates. This essay will having two point of views to discuss. The first one is for the people who’s believes that this link is useful, whilst another group of people have totally another vision, which believes that is something harmful. This essay will deal both opinion to reach the most acceptable one.
At the very outset, some families going to pets shop and purchasing for one such as, kitty, puppy, and parrot because they believe its something useful for their kids to growing up with them. There is passionate beliefs that the first most precious thing in life is take cares of pets, because it is the only way to learn the responsibilities and duties. There are unanimous it is something put them in better mood whole the life.
On the other hand, a group of people says that the best place for pets should not be the homes or zoos, but the most suitable place is the wild and that for many reasons. First, animals always controlled by their natural fundamentals, therefore it is not correct decision to change there habits. Secondly, children from well-off families only have the opportunities to get pets. Moreover, there are many researches says the pets could be the reason for allergies, infections, or transport any kind of disease to people, for instance, covid, and birds flu.
In conclusion, having pets or not always something critical for discussion. For some people it will be something to learns children how to provide unconditional love for animals. In opposite, it is vital to save the humanitarian from this bond. Ultimately, I am on the fence for both opinion, however I believe we should take cares when having pets and always doing healthy checks week in and week out.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... lot of people debates. This essay will having two point of views to discuss. The firs...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'pet'.
Suggestion: pet
...the very outset, some families going to pets shop and purchasing for one such as, ki...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are passionate beliefs'?
Suggestion: There are passionate beliefs
...for their kids to growing up with them. There is passionate beliefs that the first most precious thing in l...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'checks'' or 'check's'?
Suggestion: checks'; check's
...en having pets and always doing healthy checks week in and week out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84868421053 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54155219003 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1107980488 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20084122669 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654410072464 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479371827242 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121928399542 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403128382003 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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