Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In society the fact of having pets is always a challenge either for the parents or the children, it can be easy to maintain or can be hard so in this essay we will discuss the both opinions, is it good for children to have pet’s around or it can be led to dangerous situations.
Having pet’s like parrot a monkey sometimes even a rat is fun but for common pets like a dog or a cat is a very common way to teach children how to take responsibility from a young age and keep them company or even protect them from dangerous situations like if a thief came into the house and tried to steal something while the dog is there, the dog will attack the thief and protect its owner in a heartbeat.
Parents can have a different perspective for these things, a dog or a cat can also be sometimes life threatening but in a really rare occasions like the dog or a cat can be suddenly violent towards it’s owner they gotta kill it for their safety so instead of going through this some parents prevent even the thought, or kids can be allergic to their fur or “hair” which can cause a serious breathing problems to the kids.
All parents always wants what’s best for their kids, whether it can be a common way of teaching and parenting or, preventing their kids from unpredictable danger, both ways it’s for their own safety and comfort . In my opinion I think that having a pet is important for teaching children how to take care of things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40520446097 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49319787929 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.110441814 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.0 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184348930735 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121157259692 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695895900243 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119572978767 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579323281954 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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