The qualities that make someone admirable

Essay topics:

The qualities that make someone admirable.

In society, many people can make us admirable. Perhaps we appreciate them through some aspects like their success, their wealth, or good behaviors. In my view, the things at a person that I respect the most are their confidence and humility.

Confidence is one of the most excellent at a person. You cannot help but admire a confident person, especially if they manage it without too much arrogance. People who have confidence always give us a belief and a sense of certainty in everything they do. That is people's ability to hold themselves whenever they have to face difficulty or uncertainty. In these situations, confident people are always consistent with their standpoint. It is also the reason why they will succeed easily on their way. Honestly, I like making friends with this kind of person because I can learn many valuable things from them.

Secondly, humility is also an essential quality that can make someone admirable. Humble people are so attractive because they do not pretend that they are perfect. Instead, they understand and accept their limitations and focus on self-improvement. Even when they have many strengths and talents, they are not arrogant or show off those things. With what they have own, they will strive to work to become better day by day. I find that people who know their position and always keep themselves humble in front of everyone are admirable and successful ones in life.

Generally, besides respecting someone admirable, why don't we try to learn and become like them? It is easy if we constantly cultivate confidence, humility. You also can find and improve some other qualities. But I think confidence and humility are two qualities that absolutely contribute to our better future, our success, and make us become admirable people.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sides respecting someone admirable, why dont we try to learn and become like them? ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, kind of, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74682130671 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4138221392 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.75 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16197408058 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476354641147 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856564416889 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108227940691 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650102322743 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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