The quality of health care a person receives should not depend on the size of the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of health care for all it's citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Standard health care ought to be available for all in other to achieve healthy nation. Some people think access to great health care system should rely on the financial status while others believe that making effective health care available for the society is part of the government's task. Therefore, I totally agree that the government should set up sound health care scheme for it's citizens. This essay will highlights my opinion.
To begin with, good health care system is one of the responsibilities that citizens expect from their governments, because they see it as their right. So, making this available to the community is one of the government's assignment. Provision of affordable and effective health care management for individuals, no matter their financial status is what people look up to from government. Affordability of needed health care will make it more accessible to the people. Also, building of well equipped health care facilities, training professional personnels and ensuring their availability with no or low rate for persons will make them seek help concerning their health when it is needed. Hereby, reducing the morbidity and mortality rate in the country.
However, bank balance as a criterion to efficacious health will cause inequitable distribution of health care among the people and this can stop them from getting help when the need arise. This can lead to increase in spread of diseases, especially the contagious ones which can spread easily across the localities and can even become pandemic if not attended to immediately. If this happens, it may take toll on the global finances and affect the world's economy negatively.
In conclusion, better health care equity among the society by the government can make effective health care approachable and obtainable to all, not minding if they wealthy or not. This may reduce the disease and death rate in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'highlight'
Suggestion: highlight
...cheme for its citizens. This essay will highlights my opinion. To begin with, good heal...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...vailable to the community is one of the governments assignment. Provision of affordable and...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ls and ensuring their availability with no or low rate for persons will make them ...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to concern' or 'concern'.
Suggestion: to concern; concern
...te for persons will make them seek help concerning their health when it is needed. Hereby,...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...l on the global finances and affect the worlds economy negatively. In conclusion, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24104234528 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79543738618 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4429185269 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338767803525 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116527968775 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954480183911 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210633739221 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893167593471 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.