Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood disease? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? What is your view of this practice.
The world has recorded a reduced number of common childhood diseases in recent times, due to availability of vaccines and compliance of many parents towards immunization of their wards. In my own views, parents should be obliged to immunize their children. Although, vaccines sometimes have some side effects and unwanted effects on few children, but their benefits outweighs their risk.
Immunization has curbed a lot of childhood diseases like polio, diphtheria, tetanus and rubella thereby reducing the number of morbidity and mortality among the children within the age of under five. Also, vaccination has minimized the spread of the spread of the contagious six killer diseases among the children. This has helped to drop the number of recorded cases of the infectious diseases contractions in the world. Furthermore, when parents immunize their wards, it has a great effect on their finances by reducing the amount of amount of money spent on restoring health for sick children. Since immunization is free in some parts of the world and at lower cost in other parts, it also help to reduce the budget allocated to health on country's economy as well.
In addition, vaccination of children prevents the diseases that weaken their immune system and this protect them from opportunistic infections. Because this infections can affect their daily activities like education due to absenteesm caused by illness. It also protect them from diseases that can affect their growth and development.
To conclude, compelling parents to immunize their wards will protect them and the community against the spread of killer diseases that can cause increase in mortality. It will also reduce the money spent on illnesses by the parents, community, nation and the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31672597865 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73106574942 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.889343982 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388544383937 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148355210069 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104780962164 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243039203147 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973741815729 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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