Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood disease? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? What is your view of this practice.
The world has recorded a reduced number of common childhood diseases in recent times, due to availability of vaccines and compliance of many parents towards immunization of their wards. In my own views, parents should be obliged to immunize their children. Although, vaccines sometimes have some side effects and unwanted effects on few children, but their benefits outweighs their risk.
Immunization has curbed a lot of childhood diseases like polio, diphtheria, tetanus and rubella thereby reducing the number of morbidity and mortality among the children within the age of under five. Also, vaccination has minimized the spread of the spread of the contagious six killer diseases among the children. This has helped to drop the number of recorded cases of the infectious diseases contractions in the world. Furthermore, when parents immunize their wards, it has a great effect on their finances by reducing the amount of amount of money spent on restoring health for sick children. Since immunization is free in some parts of the world and at lower cost in other parts, it also help to reduce the budget allocated to health on country's economy as well.
In addition, vaccination of children prevents the diseases that weaken their immune system and this protect them from opportunistic infections. Because this infections can affect their daily activities like education due to absenteesm caused by illness. It also protect them from diseases that can affect their growth and development.
To conclude, compelling parents to immunize their wards will protect them and the community against the spread of killer diseases that can cause increase in mortality. It will also reduce the money spent on illnesses by the parents, community, nation and the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00784313725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53542073899 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0599919119 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24214990754 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940669180944 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503018814106 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167550592176 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349937066496 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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