Nowadays, a public facility like looking after a person's well-being is dependent on their salary and not on the basis of any emergency. I totally agree that the local authorities should take up this responsibility on their shoulder and provide such basic amenities to citizens.
In hospitals, especially the private ones, the quality of health care should not hamper the necessary methods taken for saving an individual's life because of their income. For example, whenever a person has a medical emergency and tries to admit himself, the first thing the doctors ask the patient's family is to pay the fees required for surgery or operation rather than directly operating on the patient. If they are not financially strong the surgeons would not perform the required operation. However, if the patient's family is rich enough to pay the medical expenses then the medical specialists are ready to act on the patient.
This issue can be resolved if the reigning parties take certain actions like inventing schemes to help the needy ones. For instance, providing financial help to the folks who can not afford the fees to pay for any kind of medical issues faced in their family or who fall below the poverty line. Increasing awareness among the citizens regarding schemes that are launched by the authorities is crucial for providing them with a healthy lifestyle.
To sum up, the government should come forward and provide a high level of salubrious lifestyle to the population falling under a low-income bracket. Thus, working on the total eradication of the gap between the rich and poor.
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time What problems does this cause What do you think are the possible solutions 61
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live think and behave However some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life To what extent do you agree or disagre 78
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- The quality of healthcare a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e necessary methods taken for saving an individuals life because of their income. For examp...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...lf, the first thing the doctors ask the patients family is to pay the fees required for ...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...than directly operating on the patient. If they are not financially strong the sur...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...the required operation. However, if the patients family is rich enough to pay the medica...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roviding them with a healthy lifestyle. To sum up, the government should come fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06844106464 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6706851899 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7988413383 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210350275995 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680566470918 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533870009019 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116306720102 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186250815356 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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