People hold different views on giving children the right of choice to make mistakes. While some individuals believe that it is acceptable for youngsters to make some inaccuracies, I side with those who think that adults have to be kids’ guardians from making mistakes.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that young learners can freely make mistakes as a part of their growth. In the process of trial and error, they can realize what they have done is right or wrong, then they can learn certain lessons from their faults. For example, when children get used to cooking. The first dishes may be very bad, maybe burnt, horrendous but will help them learn from experience to cook better dishes later. As a result, they might have to face lots of barriers and difficulties and overcome them better when reaching adulthood.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that parents play a crucial in showing children how to avoid mistakes. Especially when they are in the phase of acquisition, mistakes are more likely to be made without strict control. In other words, children are not able to distinguish what is appropriate and what is inappropriate. As an example, it is increasingly common for teenagers to smoke since they are influenced by their peers and usually they do not aware of the hazardous consequences of smoking. Besides, crime and violence among young people have also increased drastically due to a lack of parents` care and attention.
In conclusion, although children have their own rights to make mistakes, it is adults’ duty to protect their offspring from making mistakes.
- Thanks to the development of air travel and telecommunication contacts between different parts of the world have developed To what extend do you agree or disagree 52
- In many countries governments spend a lot of money celebrating national holidays and festivals However some people think that spending money on these celebrations is a waste To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 67
- Some people believe that if the police force carries guns it would encourage a higher level of violence in the society To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time What problems does this cause What do you think are the possible solutions 61
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99253731343 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7270376307 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1690759805 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278244364534 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936863858683 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812828675317 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188373771357 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102788976225 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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