Money is the essential tool for developing a country or personal income. Certain, individual says they have rolled up their sleeves to cope up with the basic requirements so we should not pay tax to government, while some opposes by saying, the tax collected by government is used for betterment of citizens. In this essay, I will try to elucidate both the views with some relevant examples.
To begin with, there are several reasons people are not willing to pay taxes. Firstly, people are working for long hours to create extra source of income so they can fulfill the basic requirements of life. As life is becoming, more difficult due to inflation so they need to ensure they have ample amount of facilities such as cars and house. For illustration, majority people work for ten to twelve hours a day so, they can buy their dream house. Secondly, life is full of surprises who guess medical emergency appears out of moon such as illness and surgery. Thus, to ensure they have basic requirement and need money whenever required for money they have in their hand citizens are not paying taxes.
Conversely, the government collect taxes to support the country economically. To commence with, the country development depends on the government and if it states they not have then life will be impacted. For instance, they tax collected by government used in medical to buy latest requirements and building a new hospital to cure from illness. Moreover, government need money to make a country financial stable by pushing it into the market and saving local currency.
To sum up with, certain individual wants to save money to fulfill their family requirements in rising inflation and in medical emergency. I personally believe that we should pay taxes to government because it helping to develop a country, providing latest equipment in hospitals to cure diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...lected by government used in medical to buy latest requirements and building a new hospita...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...money to make a country financial stable by pushing it into the market and saving...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the latest'.
Suggestion: providing the latest
...ecause it helping to develop a country, providing latest equipment in hospitals to cure diseases...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00320512821 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71900491996 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7791681942 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261169486316 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867456046848 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624331917041 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155741353521 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034281278706 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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