In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Many people claim that the size of family, and the roles of family members among husbands and wives have been changed significantly in recent years. From my point of view, while family formation patterns are changing in some ways, they have both positive and negative sides that are worth discussing.
According to the newest statistics, the birth rate of families is tending to decrease. There are three main factors that lead to this situation. The first one is due to modern advances in medicine, which not only help reduce infant mortality, improve their health, but also contribute to making it easier for parents to choose the sex of their children. Financial pressure is the second reason for their choice to have fewer children. The fewer members, the less pressure on spending and less burden on those who have to work to support their families. The last one is that the mothers are now more inclined to go out to work than to stay at home and become a housewife. The above reasons also influence the change in the preference of many people to live in a nuclear family rather than an extended family.
Another factor to consider is that there are an increasing number of children living in sole-parent families due to the high divorce rate, not to mention the considerable number of sing-mom families who want to have children without being married. Unhappy married life, past traumas lead them to distrust in family happiness. As a result, they choose to be single parents, take care of their children and live a freer life. The number of single parents continues to increase, sometimes, they choose to be single not because they have an unhappy past but because of their hobbies and because they see it as a trend.
As I said at the beginning, today's women tend to go out to work and fulfill their own passions rather than becoming a responsible housewife of their family. We are living in a modern society that strives to promote gender equality. There are more and more policies to support, encourage and create the best conditions for women to have equal opportunities in study, work and all other activities in society. In other words, the roles of family members among husbands and wives have been also changed, women have also become breadwinners along with their husbands as they are financially independent.
Personally speaking, I strongly believe that these changes have both advantages and disadvantages. The changes in the roles of family members could be seen as valuable progress as many men are not put under pressure of covering the needs of the entire families, and women do not have to sacrifice their jobs in order to look after children and assume all of houseworks. Moreover, being a single parent, they can lead a freer life, less arguments, they can go anywhere and do whatever they like without being bothered by anyone. However, without the assistance of their partners, many single parents might face financial difficulty. As a result, their children are more likely to drop out of schools because they find it difficult to afford high tuition fees. In addition, many children might suffer a lack of parental guidance and love since busy parents have less contract with them.
Taking everything into consideration, along with the development of society, the structure of families and family roles are also constantly changing. Everything has two sides of it, besides the positive side, there are negative aspects. Therefore, both benefits and drawbacks of these family changes do exist at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 671, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to stay at home and become a housewife. The above reasons also influence the change...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun arguments is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...gle parent, they can lead a freer life, less arguments, they can go anywhere and do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 41.998997996 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2950.0 1615.20841683 183% => OK
No of words: 596.0 315.596192385 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94966442953 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56437762647 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481543624161 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.9 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0543987881 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199775207827 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631495262259 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800928411794 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141139201824 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108954217569 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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