In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Why are these changes happening? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In recent times, the roles and the structure of family have changed. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the contributing factors of this issue and also put forward a number of benefits and drawbacks in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, as we reside in the temporary era, we are unable to avoid several alterations which might happen into our life, particularly, the changes which was discussed in the previous paragraph. Furthermore, I firmly believe that there are two causative factors of this issue. It, first and foremost, is caused by the enhancement of globalisation, in which in the end, this circumstance insists a family to alter various common activities in earlier times in order to be able to survive and continue their life properly. Second but not less crucial, it, moreover, is produced by the lack of incomes which countless families are capable of obtaining.
Regarding to the positive impact of this issue, it is able to make all families to obtain more incomes in which it will be fruitful for them to complete their various needs. Nevertheless, it is also going to bestow a negative influence, particularly to adolescent which will acquire the lack of affection of their parents, which in the end, it will create another negative consequence.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that in order to minimize the improvement number of this issue, all government in every country across the globe has to make an improved regulation which is able to decrease the amount of negative changes of this issue. Thus, we, as a part of the society, have to fully support our government endeavours in order to create fewer negative outcomes for all families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, thus, as to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98958333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83836486452 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2634475034 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.7 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125180673129 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595194863962 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654951521387 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766445901992 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151251913825 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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