In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is certainly true that, number of family members and their roles have changed significantly in recent year. This essay will suggest that, independent family decision is the biggest advantage of this and reduce family bonding to strengthen the family relation is the primary drawbacks.
With regards to the positive concern, people nowadays are more conscious regarding nuclear family size and their positive impact on individual decision making process. Nuclear family stand out with fewer numbers where closeness among the members can exist and it will further helpful to solve the family problems. On top up this, each member can have the access of family information and they can independently make a family decision which is direct beneficial to the family concern as well as to the self. As a result of that, more happiness among the family member can be seen which may not be happen in joint family system. A recent study conducted by Tribhuwan University found that, people from nuclear family are more free and happy with their decision making process then the other type of family.
Those opposed to this say that, limited number of members within the family have to fulfill the need of the family and they get very less time to support their family at the time of need. People in this competitive world have to pay enough time regarding to fulfill the professional responsibility and they get multiple stress relating to fulfilling the job duties along with the need of dependent children within the home. As a consequent of that, head of the family members in certain time feel very poor on personal obligations for not being able to support their family needs in timely manner.
In conclusion, small size of family members in the nuclear family system would have more freedom to make independent decision as an advantage, however, the level of trust will be decline among the family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00626959248 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48234298791 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501567398119 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2173886427 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.181818182 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220866298478 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109658880662 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450372956019 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155187656 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453213827832 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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