In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring ? Do you think these changes are positive or negative ?
It is true that in many countries, both the family pattern and family roles have been changing in a few decades. The following essay will analyze some of these changes as well as positive and negative sides of this tendency.
To begin with, there are several changes taking places in many families nowadays. Firstly, since today people are becoming more independent, people tend to live in a nuclear family rather than an extended family as they used to do in the past. Concretely, couples choose to live with their daughters and sons without grandparents or other relatives. In some cases, when turning 18 years old or older, many children decide to live far from their family, which can help them strongly build self-confidence. In terms of family, these days, most women are more likely to be working mothers instead of merely playing the role of a housewife. As a result, males have been no longer the breadwinners in their families.
In my view, the above development has not only merits but demerits. Regarding the advantages, this change provides individuals with more opportunities to gain success in their life. For instance, being offered the chance to work, many females today have promoted to major positions in large companies or even achieved higher education. Similarly, the choice to live separately from parents allows young couples to have more personal space and more freedom to enjoy life. Also, there would be less misunderstanding and conflict between family members because of the generation gap when three generations live together. Nevertheless, when giving birth, these couples may face with difficulties in taking care of babies as it is hard for them to hire a baby sister who has both child nursing care experience and passion with their children. Moreover, family bonds might possibly lessen as a consequence of physical distance.
In conclusion, the family structure and family roles have altered in recent years in some ways and I argue that this trend has both pros and cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
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Line 9, column 862, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
... their children. Moreover, family bonds might possibly lessen as a consequence of physical dis...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his trend has both pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, in some cases, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1234939759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68272566313 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1802877805 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22142122251 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719368240817 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767685442213 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169932280803 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866771710715 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.