In recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as factory farming and the use of technology to improve crops. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the agricultural has a significant development. Therefore, there are so many technologies which are invented to enhance the crops. Some people emphasize that vertical farming is an essential change to promote the yield. However, the others do not support this idea because they believe that this enlargement can be harmful and favor a horizontal farming. In this essay, I would like to share my point of views with this statement.
In terms of traditional farming method, there is no doubt that throughout the human’s history people tend to apply this method to make a food because of its advantages. First, the products which made by this process are pure and healthy as people do not use a chemical substance to shorten the growth of plants. Moreover, the farmers can sell their productions with an exorbitant price to the business thanks to its purity. Second, it is friendly with the ecology; the waste of harvest can be used as fertilizer for soil after decomposition. Not only does it supply the environment with the nutrition but also not affect to human daily life. For example, some manufacturer wants to earn more profits so they overuse the toxic which cause many bad effects to the biodiversity.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of traditional farming such as expensive and vulnerable. So some people assume that the factory farming is crucial for the expansion of yields. Furthermore, the technologies are playing fundamental role of urban renewal, sustainable production of a safe and varied food supply. Additionally, the density of population has reached its peak recently. Consequently, it leads the cultural farming to not meet people’s need but the vertical farming can fix this phenomenon base on the high-tech.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of utilizing new technology in modern agricultural. Although the horizontal farming bring many the advantages to environment and human, the vertical farming outweigh the traditional farming in every aspects of productivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27134146341 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0312652362 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2253350987 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237841801605 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713625440859 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626344006021 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146811692023 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426440333244 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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