In recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as factory farming and the use of technology to improve crops. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, the agricultural has a significant development. Therefore, there are so many technologies which are invented to enhance the crops. Some people emphasize that vertical farming is an essential change to promote the yield. However, the others do not support this idea because they believe that this enlargement can be harmful and favor a horizontal farming. In this essay, I would like to share my point of views with this statement.
In terms of the traditional farming method, there is no doubt that throughout the human’s history people tend to apply this method to make a food because of its advantages. First, the products which made by this process are pure and healthy as people do not use a chemical substance to shorten the growth of plants. Moreover, the farmers can sell their productions with an exorbitant price to the business thanks to its purity. Nevertheless, not only does it supply the environment with the nutrition but also not affect human daily life. For example, some manufacturer wants to earn more profits so they over-utilization the pesticides which cause many bad effects to the biodiversity.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of traditional farming such as expensive and vulnerable. Thus, some people assume that factory farming is crucial for the expansion of yields. Furthermore, the technologies are playing the fundamental role of urban renewal, sustainable production of a safe and varied food supply. Additionally, the density of population has reached its peak recently. Consequently, it leads the cultural farming to not meet people’s need but the vertical farming can fix this phenomenon base on the high-tech.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of utilizing new technology in modern agricultural. Although the horizontal farming brings many the advantages to environment and human, the vertical farming outweighs the traditional farming in every aspect of the farming industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38585209003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11127767969 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5609135789 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234018648223 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702148363827 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676894672078 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145786777651 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442927364692 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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