In recent years, more and more people choose to live in nuclear families. However, many others would prefer to stay in families with many generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of individuals choosing living in nuclear families while many others would rather stay in extended families. This essay is going to discuss both viewpoints.
On the one hand, nuclear families give their members a lot of advantages. Obviously, living in a nuclear family brings much superb happiness to adults. For instance, if parents who have to work hard to earn money see their offspring, they will be more motivated and energetic in life. Moreover, good parents in nuclear families have a profound influence on kids’ behaviour because they make an ideal example for their children to follow. For examples, apart from teachers, parents are the second tutor educating kids life skills like table manners or good behaviours with others, which are rarely taught in schools.
On the other hand, extended families also bring a lot of meaningful values to their members. Clearly, the elderly who are taken care of in an extended family can find happiness for the rest of their life. For example, because grandparents had encountered many unstable periods in the past, they tend to share with children about their heroic stories, thus eliminating the generation gap. Apart from strengthening family bonds, living in extended families can reduce household financial burden. To illustrate, when adults go to work, they do not have to hire babysitters because grandparents can take care of little children for them.
In conclusion, living in nuclear families and extended families all have great benefits to their members. From my point of view, I think everybody should take well the responsibility with their relatives regardless of types of family they live in for the sake of home’s happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.229390681 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69071325525 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7718890754 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2565231982 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990080429257 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684228214973 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18158611669 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658800726337 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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