Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem?
In current times, there is a great number of teenagers committing crimes in urban area, especially in big cities. I am going to outline some causes of this phenomenon and simultaneously suggest several ways in order to decrease this proportion, as well as prepare and prevent better in the future.
To begin with, there are two main reasons leading to the rate of young crimes. First of all, children's morals, personalities and behaviors are mostly shaped by the surrounding environment where they are born and living. Accordingly, what young generation become in the future is based on upbringings, education, as well as parents. For instance, if a child was born in a family, which has assiduous father and graceful mother, that boy or girl, without a doubt, will grow up well-behaved and diligently. Similarly, if his or her parents pay excessive indulgences, the character of the child will be affected badly. Nevertheless, somehow, it is not true for all circumstances, which are also influenced by the society. As we know, cities consist of bad things, such as criminals, social evils, racism, violence, and so on. Therefore, lots of youngsters are tempted and compelled to do such illegal things, as they cannot control themselves before attractive sayings.
In my opinion, there is a number of good preparation that individuals can equip and hinder themselves from being bad people. Firstly, students should be taught about the awareness and respect of obeying laws at school, as well as understanding about criminology. Secondly, the government must bring out stricter punishments for all kinds of criminal, especially which are related to implication of juveniles. Thirdly, specific parenting courses could be designed for parents to look after and guarantee that their children develop well, also to tackle common issues in families.
In summarize, due to the environment and social problems, people of young age are easily involved in sinning. Yet, better education, stern rules, as well as parenting classes are the best solutions for decreasing this ratio.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28398791541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96693042297 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652567975831 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9564393298 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102612169967 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309469221579 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366143339358 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722363636457 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512530805136 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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