In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
new Roman",serif">Over the past decades, many countries in the world have seen quick economical growth. As a result, the people of big cities in these nations increase their living standards compared to the people of pastoral areas. there are several reasons why this problem is occurred and necessary step taken by both government and public to overcome the situation.
new Roman",serif">this is to say first of all, the predominant problems resulting rapid economic development in certain areas are increasing crimes in whole country, and reducing the cultural diversity of these nations. The crime is directly proportional to overall job availability. In other words, one area of any particular country is suddenly improved their overall conditions, it means, they have abundant job opportunities in their hand. what happen to other portions, they do not find that facilities, so they cannot improve their living standards. so, they easily tend to heinous crimes. Consequently, the crime rate is increased dramatically. Another cause of these problems is the loss of many indigenous cultures. For example, In Bangladesh, about 90% industries are located in a Dhaka, which is the capital of this country. people need to come here, if he or she want to find job. people who live in tribal communities also need to do this. this is why, they have learnt new customs and new language. For doing these things regularly, the steadily loss the heritages.
new Roman",serif">Initially, there are potential ways to solve these problems, or at least mitigate the effects. The finest path to solve these is, governments should decentralize the economic development. if they can bring more jobs to rural areas or areas where indigenous people live, the two main problem might solve. For instance, the government of South Korea faced the same problem after 1990. they also did the same eradicate the problem. it is also responsibility to big company to open more branches in country sides.
new Roman",serif">To conclude, although it is serious issue, there are step by governments and individuals can take to reduce its effects. if we are to save our country and community, it is important this is treated as a priority for all concerned.
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- In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole What are the 78
- In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole What are the 84
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- In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole What are the 84
- In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country sides This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole What are the 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41988950276 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06198726551 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3841626806 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3043478261 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7391304348 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205887079401 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540575288826 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480666990822 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107804861405 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609033699204 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.