In recent years, the structure of a family and role of it's members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is universally acknowledged that " Family is all in all for everyone". However , the formation of family and contribution of it's members have undergone dramatic changes over the few years. Here, this essay intends to figure out main changes and positive outcome of this practice.
Manifold of transportations in a family could be taken into consideration . First and foremost, joint families are converting into nuclear ones due to influence of technology. To elaborate, most of people are engaged with electronic apparatus in order to get amusement and relaxation and therefore no-one has time to interact with each other in their spare time. Unlike past , today generation do not prefer to stay under one roof as they consider loneliness is best panacea for them to spend life happily . As a result , reduction in family size is becoming order of the day in these day . Moreover , females have become rub shoulders with males in every working field. To be specific, both spouse man and woman have perception to work at workplace for pursuing luxurious lifestyle like ravishing home, expensive car, mobile phone and so on. Consequently , this trend is supposed to be mitigate the gender differences among the society.
There are ample of benefits of these changes for people . Initially , masses can get rid of economical instability. To illustrate , in small families , breadwinners do not have Extra burden of financial expenses such as food , electricity bills, accommodations, outfits and many more. Hence, changing in families enables individual to manage household expenditures in this era of inflation. Apart from this, children have become independent and responsible due to this change . To demonstrate, adolescents do work such as washing clothes, cooking and sometimes they also take decision related to education and work in the absence of parents who have to go outside for doing job. Thence , children are likely to attain freedom of taking decisions of their lives as well as became experienced because of changing in families .
In conclusion, alternation in family structure and role of family members ensures various pros to people for spend life wisely . However , I still believe that humankind should not underestimate the drawbacks of this phenomenon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36768802228 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01134731973 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637883008357 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9053695843 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.35 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215175751699 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641726542661 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605032986272 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13436610793 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642792681094 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.