Research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Trading agreements and internship have been widespread around the world according to a study. This essay agrees that the benefits of this development are more its negative effects because this helps in saving time and money. These two advantages will be discussed as follows.
Many people around the world prefer achieving business activities such as selling, paying and learning materials regarding commerce over the internet in order to avoid wasting time. Working or learning over the internet means that the person has not to use the car to access the workplace; in addition, it means tasks could be done in late time like after midnight, which allows to manage the time actively. For more clarification, a survey was conducted; In 2014, in Al-Riyadh the capital city of Saudi Arabia showed that the rate of businessmen who use websites to do their works has been rising for 10 years by 20% as a result of the high speed of deals achievement.
No one can deny that the prices of the most services and items via the internet are cheaper than anywhere else due to the low value of projects capitals over the internet. Launching a project online some times needs a Facebook page only or a small application and usually these kinds of businesses do not cost much of money. For example, in the present time youTubers run massive business over their channels which did not cost unless good internet connection by 20$ at most.
In conclusion, the advantages are more than disadvantages regarding running commercial projects online because that leads to save time and money.
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...ause that leads to save time and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98490566038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60780655674 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1748196324 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096215479858 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400388329048 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391824658196 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661592654627 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034354782446 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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