Research has shown that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertising of certain food products should be banned in the same way as the advertising of cigarettes is banned. Do you agree or disagree?
The over-consumption of certain kinds of foods such as fast food can have a detrimental impact on health as smoking. Although I agree with the statement, I strongly believe that the advertisements of these foods should not be prohibited as those of cigarettes.
To begin with, it is widely known that smoking can result in health deterioration. To be more specific, smoke coming from cigarettes is likely to harm not only smokers but also surrounding people. Frequent exposure to smoke will lead to a high risk of respiratory illnesses ranging from asthmas to even lung cancer. Likewise, eating too much junk food can damage people's health. This is because fast food is high in carbohydrate and fat levels but low in fibers or proteins, thus it can cause Illnesses such as diabetes on obesity. Therefore, over-consuming fast food can be as harmful as smoking to health of consumers or users.
Nevertheless, I would argue that it is not necessary to prohibit fast food adverts as those of cigarettes for several reasons. First, fast food has gained more popularity worldwide in recent years because of its convenience, so it seems to become a necessary dish for the majority of people. Cigarettes, meanwhile, seems te be favorable to only a small group of individuals. Therefore, the prohibition of fast food advertising programs may lead to a more significant decrease in sales for food businesses which if thriving will support governments to carry out a variety of important concerns such as social security or education through a large amount of taxes. In my opinion, it would be better to impose a strict regulation to force advertisers to display clear health warnings and ingredients of food products in customers' health protection.
In conclusion, although certain advertised food such as fast food can cause negative impacts on consumers' health as cigarettes. I believe that the two products advertising should not end up the same way that is prohibition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08978328173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05844120898 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5109089195 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247736259556 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917406179029 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653622423681 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181014661673 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556125648602 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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