Research indicates that we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?
Individuals’ personality is affected by heredity from generation to generation much more than the experiences they obtained in their life which is the consequence of several research. From my point of view, empirical experiences are decisive core to the majority of people’s characteristics.
To begin with, several infants were born who were educated about their code of conduct and personalities by their parents. However, when they grow up and commence to immerse themselves in a social environment, some of their characters will change. To illustrate, despite the fact that the child is indolent in studying due to lack of well-educated foundation from the parent, they can become a diligent person when they reach adulthood. This is because it stems from accessing the society, wraps the ambiance of the studious people always around them, the ability of their recognition will transform gradually, hence they will change their indolent personalities to be eligible to this environment.
Furthermore, regarding those who are temporarily struggling in their life. Imagine, several kinds of people who have unsuccessful careers as their projects are refused by numerous investors and customers, are perhaps less motivated, and have worse habits. Nonetheless, when they seek potential start-up opportunities or suitable market segments for their projects, achievable encouragement will exort them to work hard. As a result, people embark on changing their adverse characters.
In conclusion, practical experiences are the core in decisions about people’s personalities which is my perspective because it is more dependent on the social impacts than personal heredity when they were born.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some research'.
Suggestion: some research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66274509804 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15781498243 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3053298258 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132354207874 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542274154516 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563322086973 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102393618832 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537353972828 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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