Research into new type of medicines and treatments are essential for health and dealing with diseases. Who do you think you should find these received did the researches; private companies, individuals or government?
It is necessary to research in new methods of treatment and medication to cure illness and to deal with the infection. This essay will intend to analyse my prospective about this case. I think that this is the responsibility of Government or individual to pay funds for this rather than private companies due to their responsibilities to serve people and for affordable cost.
To initial, nowadays many inventions have happened. The importance of developing new Medicare for healing illness is necessary. If these researchers are funded by private companies, they charge a high rate of manufacturing from the consumer. It is costly for the common people. Due to the high prices of medicines the individual should not be able to purchase these expensive ones. Hence, the rate of illness remains constant. Then there is a no implementation of the new researched medicines happened to cure the disease of the people.
Furthermore, the Government is the power who had to take decisions for the people. It is the duty of Government or individuals to fund the medicines for diseases and illnesses. To elaborate it, the are made up of the common people of the country. So it is their responsibility to fund for this type of researches.The Government's first and last duty is to serve people, because they are chosen by the common people. The government should pay for the latest treatments for several diseases and on the Medicare that is provided to the nation. For example, in this dangerous pandemic of Covid-19 our Government is providing covid vaccine to the people of the nation. They are also helping other countries by exporting vaccination. The several lives are saved by our High command.Thus, it is the responsibility of our government or every individual living in the country to serve the nation by funding the medical researches.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I believe that, it is the first priority of our administration or solitary to paying collection for new therapy of dangerous diseases, while, not of the private companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05325443787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11125588281 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485207100592 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6302673265 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8947368421 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268529785163 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822662144903 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690241979045 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153816133389 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537117933986 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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