It is clear that humans are God's most wonderful creation, thus researchers have not acknowledged human behavior and emotions. According to recent surveys, our characteristics have from two origins: which we were born with and the experiences we have got through. This essay will discuss the reason why the influence around us is more effective than the nature one.
Initially, every baby is a blank paper from their birth and mentally equal although they may have some physical difference. Children only observe the world around them and stimulate the actions, then their characteristics are formed. As an illustration, no child has been written to appear to show their characteristics, no child is greed initially. In short, mankind's nature depends on the environment around them.
In addition, effects from families and friends are also significant. As mentioned, the mind of children is totally empty and they are born angels. Thus, they learn from their parents, the behaviors and reaction to serious incidents, through their perspective and different angles from their peeks at school or their neighborhoods, whose observation from different teachers. Plus, on account of the way kids acknowledge, quickly or slowly, bad or good actions, they will make their unique character on their own. For example, almost all the kids behave nearly similarly to their raisers such as greed or kindness.
In conclusion, our characteristics we have had all have the same platform which is from the quality of education at home and school and no one is born mentally superior
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding influence'?
Suggestion: the surrounding influence
... This essay will discuss the reason why the influence around us is more effective than the nature one. ...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...y. In short, mankinds nature depends on the environment around them. In addition, effects from families ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27490039841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9226794022 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6914561366 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197149621816 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682354436026 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105785057154 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156453943565 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136540111369 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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