Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
It is true that the multitude of criminals who imprison commit crimes again after being set free. There are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon and a variety of solution should be adopted by governments to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why criminals continuously break a law. One reason is that after being free, most convicts are uncapable of finding good occupations due to their criminal past. Therefore, to have money for a living, they may carry out illicit activities such as murdering, kidnapping, or assaulting. Furthermore, some criminals get accustomed to committing illegal activities so after being emancipated, they continue breaking the law.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be that the authorities should supply criminals with a small amount of money and stable occupations so that they can earn a living at the first period. A second measure would be that there should be rehabilitation of offenders course for criminals before setting they free from prison.
In conclusion it is clear that there are various reasons for the phenomenon why criminals tend to commit crimes continuously after released and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.345 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85646197244 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6277822892 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261252437701 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113181728361 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741493495188 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172142094499 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375656598141 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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