Travel industry experienced to boom in the later part of the 20 century. Because of Tourisam historical sites and monumentsare demolishing.this essay will discus the cause of devastating of of historical sites and it's solutions.
To begin with, one of the main reason leads to damage of monuments and historical buildings are especially they are occupied more places, some people claim that the place can be used to develop e-hubs or other malls, hotels to generate the income in hefty. For instance compare to the monument which. Used to generate Income via entrance fee, those restaurants and malls give huge benefit to the people.thus people lure to demolish old buildings and invest to construct the new ones.secondly historical sites are maintaing dificuilty in now days. Because of low generating income from tourists that site gets difficulty to maintain needs like facitation of extra recreational things.thise all are the reasons to damage of historical sites.
However, travel industry indispensable source for economy to the local people as well as nation. People can generate huge income by Tourisam with out demolishing the buildings. One of the solution is to allow unsfco to get get it name of ubisfco world heritage sites that can help to create the awerness of the monument or heritage site thus leads influx the beer of the people visit the sites. Another one is
Constration of mall and Water parks try to relocate another places like suburbs.
To conclude, heritage site are gifts for new generation by old people even they did not have technology they provide some cultural insights, protecting such treasures are reflects the preservences of tradition and culture. To prevent such a valuable heritage by few indispensable steps include allow unscfco and give those monuments handover to archaeological department to manage them properlly.
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples. 56
- As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair.What could be done to prevent this? 78
- Modern technology is now very common in many work places.How do you think this has changed the way we worked?Do you think there are disadvantages to reply too much on technology? 22
- Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.To what extent do you agree? 56
- Tourism is an ever growing industry.What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89353798087 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8805341977 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.083333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 67.0 5.01903807615 1335% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13971662311 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439207709735 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488226346612 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649154410894 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572562380324 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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